Thursday, April 17, 2014

Blogging from #AtoZChallenge - Oxford comma and Ozzie


Ah, the dreaded Oxford comma. Some love it, some hate it, and some don't get it. As you can see, I use it. In case you don't know what the Oxford comma is, it's the second comma in a list of three or more items followed by "and".

Another example:
We visited the horse rescue and brought home Ozzie, Bahzra, and Santana.

I'm a recent convert. My previous thinking was that the word "and"  is there, why do we need the comma? How is there any room for confusion?

The Chicago Manual of Style recommends using the Oxford comma, but I don't think they do a great job of giving a reason why. It does say it prevents ambiguity and gives one example but doesn't point out the importance.

For breakfast, I chose between waffles, scrambled eggs, and biscuits and gravy. Biscuits and gravy are essentially a unit, I didn't have to choose between biscuits and gravy. Since these situations exist AND we want to be consistent, it does make sense to use the Oxford comma.

Another explanation that won me over (in my own head) is the situation of a list of three independent phrases.

Example:
I ran toward the loose horse, he spun and bolted in the other direction, and the dumped rider lunged to catch him.

Maybe not a great sentence, but as we discussed for B (separating independent phrases by but or and requires a comma), this comma is required. So again, for consistency, the Oxford comma does have a solid case. I came to this conclusion reluctantly, but here I am.

Do you use the Oxford comma? Love it, hate it? Just happy you have an editor to decide for you?

Now for Ozzie's story. A friend of mine, the lady who owned Jackson, wanted to move on to a more challenging ride that would be able to keep up with our arabs on the trail. We visited a rescue, Dreamcatcher Equine Rescue. They had over 100 horses out on a big pasture. Since the owner was driving back from a fundraiser, my friend and I toured the pasture. I identified two horses that I thought were awesome. When the owner showed up, she said one of them was her personal horse and the other was an untrained arab. I wasn't at all looking for a horse, but I couldn't pass up that arab - he became Bahzra (pictured on B day).

They found a little black-and-white pony for my friend. I'd hoped she would try out several horses, but she fell in love at once. Ozzie got his name from the first three letters of the license plate on my trailer (OZY). Ozzie was a spoiled pony, but smart and a good challenge for my friend to improve her riding skills. By the way, most horses at rescues have absolutely nothing wrong with them, have never been starved, and are often nicely trained. (note that Oxford comma?) Rescues are a great place to start when looking for a horse (or dog).

15 comments:

  1. I never knew what that was called. The horse pics were great yet again. Shawn from Laughing at Life 2

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  2. I like the Oxford comma. It can make a huge difference in how you parse a sentence. Good post! (Samantha @ http://samanthadunawaybryant.blogspot.com)

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  3. firm believer in the oxford comma. and the black and white is beautiful.

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  4. Isn't this a wonderful blog! I need it! Thanks for the clarity and help.

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    1. So glad you're enjoying it - I'm having fun writing (and researching for the ones I don't know.)

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  5. I LOVE the Oxford comma. There are several memes out there that sum up pretty cleverly why it's needed. Elle @ Erratic Project Junkie

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    1. I won't say I love it, but I'm definitely a convert to using it. I can't stand inconsistency, so there's really no other way around it.

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  6. I love the Oxford comma and feel so strongly about it that I asked my copy editor to put all of them back in after she had meticulously removed each one. :D

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  7. I used the Oxford comma, which I was taught in elementary school, until recently when I was co-editing an anthology and told by my fellow editors to stop. I miss it.
    Visiting my fellow A to Zers. Hope you'll visit back. This year my theme is quirky quotes. www.widowsphere.blogspot.com

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    1. You've collected some amazing quotes, definitely worth visiting.

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  8. We wrote about the Comma on one of the community blogs for this years challenge. LOL We called it Commageddon hahaha. Going to spend a chunk of time reading all this.. again LOVE your blog!

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    1. Commageddon - love that! I hate that as much as I think I understand a rule, some complicated sentence structure blows my mind!

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  9. I'm old and we were not taught the Oxford comma. I was happy for many years and then started writing on sites like Helium where I was constantly reminded to add the third comma. Not so happy anymore but styles change. Still hate it but always use it. Stopping by on the A to Z. Think I'll stay and have a look around.
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    1. I was taught the Oxford comma in Texas in 1-2nd grade around 1975. Then I moved to Colorado and was taught not to use it. I stuck with that through writing my first book. During my second, I became convinced it should be used. So I'll stick with it unless publishing hinges on it!

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